long long time ago,in a galaxy far fare away in the deep core,everything was calm and peaceful.Until a mysterious monster came. it’s name is four-bat it’s known for al the Jedi’s he has killed. He has killed over 40 jedi’s.
The four-bat smashed over Princess Leias bilding making it collapse. Every body though Princess Leia died but likely Princess Leia was in the supermarket buyng a RT-97C Heavy Blaster Rifle (MG15) but from no where the four bat came from now where
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June 6, 2016 at 4:05 pm
Jaume,
You have started this whilst drawing on the opening of a great myth and you have shown that you can punctuate complex sentences.
Targets:
1) Revise your use of apostrophes
2) Where is the rest? Develop and finish.